Saturday, November 24, 2012

"RU Ready For This Poem?"

[16] As October ends, so does the college application process.
[16] I completed my transcript-release forms, and submitted them in.
[16] But now the painful thought of rejection had caused me great distress.
[16] My mind could not be at ease, it was always in a violent spin.

[14] "It will take about two weeks," My guidance counselor said.
[14] But she did not realize how much these "two weeks," I would dread.
[18] I tried to read a few books, to alleviate the worries in my head.
[18] Yet, my plentiful reading could not put my heartaches sound asleep in bed.

[16] "Alas," I thought to myself, as from my room I gazed at the stars.
[16] But a glimmer of hope arose, upon looking at my guitar.
[15] Playing acoustic guitar, yet again, shall come to my aid
[15] Whilst practicing, a joyous mood was inevitably made.

[15] The early November days now pass me by gracefully quick.
[15] I have found many songs I desire to learn how to play.
[9] But I do not know which songs to pick.
[22] I narrow my choices down to certain selections from Hillsong United and The Fray.
[22] Regardless, I have found any type of music, to easily have my worries allayed.

[19] The two week duration hurried by, but I hardly paid any attention.
[18] Nevertheless, I was still eager to find out if I was admitted.
[19] I finished my homework, and went upstairs to my bedroom feeling no tension.
[18] I was longing to finally have all my anxieties acquitted.

[17] I sit with my laptop at my wooden table, awaiting the news,
[19] hoping my email of admission to Rutgers University comes soon.
[17] My inbox reads "1 New Message," and I fearfully await my plight.
[19] But I see a "Congratulations!" and continue reading to my delight.

6 comments:

  1. Yay congratulations! Reading your acceptance email was probably the greatest feeling. And I really thought the title of your poem was cute and creative!

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  2. This is such a great poem! I love how you choose to alleviate your stress through music. I can definitely relate to the anxiety of waiting and the relief after the application process was over. Congrats on your acceptance!!

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  3. Congratulations on your acceptance! You definitely deserve it! I really liked how you got wrote about playing a guitar because I never knew you played! I tried to learn then my fingers started hurting... Lol. Anyways, after I read your title I was excited to read your poem! Good job!

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  4. I loved your poem. I could relate to it in many ways. I'm also applying to rutgers and I often find myself going to my guitar trying to pass time. (Plus, I love the fray! Haha) but your rhyming was great and your title was very creative. Congrats on your acceptance and keep up the good poems!

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  5. Congratulations. The wait for the reply from a college is really nerve-racking for me as well. Maybe I'll see you at there at Rutgers.

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  6. Nice job i remember that feeling of acceptance, there was nothing like it.

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